That theres a question ,
which i am unable to know .
That thers an answer
which i am unable to blow .
Every question has an answer
that every1 of us know ,
then why is this question
always difficult to glow
Why do i have options to choose
when i never want to lose
why do i never know
which way to leave and on which to move
why is it alws so,
This or the other?
Am I one person today and tomorrow another?
Am I both at once? A hypocrite before others...
Perhaps to answer these why
i have to search for who,
Who am I?
would definetely answer those why.....
---nits.........
8 comments:
umm..i stick to ma earlier words that " my brother has a potential to become a good poet as well as a grt writer"
well i see this poem of his as an extention of the earlier one.
life is strange and difficult to understand and alwaz load you wid so many question to answers and so many options to choose from.
well in d last bhaiya has quoted an question " who i am"...well in that context i wana say...
" He the best brother of d world..atleast in ma eyes"
love u!!!
n all d best fr ur future poems.
loved it!...really innovative!...the bottomline is basic and obvious..but the fragments are really innovative!
Hey....u write awesum yar...didnt actually know u r a wonderful writer too. Though all ur writings are very good, but ur "who m I" is very touching. Keep rocking .....u r blessed with the talent.
hii nits!!!
Absolutely amzing...
not bad.. so much of inner qualities..
hmm.. both the poems means alot and so very true. no1 knows what is rgt n wrong n who they are..
Impressed..
keep up the good work
Keep smiling
Prerna
hi nitin..
lovely poem...........
toooooo good....
Chill and write many more poemssssssssss.
love,
Snehal
abe since when did u became such a good poet....
i should ask... KIS NE BANA DIYA SHAYAR :)
i personally liked WHO AM I..
its vry realistic.. n i can relate to it too :)
Way to go Kavi Nits :)
abe since when did u became such a good poet....
i should ask... KIS NE BANA DIYA SHAYAR :)
i personally liked WHO AM I..
its vry realistic.. n i can relate to it too :)
Way to go Kavi Nits :)
Every question is an answer in itself and every answer is a questionin itself or perhaps leads us to another question...It is this shuttling between the answer and question that we keep loosing and keep finding a new self of ours...so who am I? I am a spiderman...lolz...kidding..
btw, very nice poem..a reflection of what goes inside us...
Cheerio:-)
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