"Someone"
Life is a lonely path ,
where everyone of us ran so fast.
Amidst this race, you need someone who cares,
one who holds us close in their thoughts and prayers.
Everybody search for someone,
one who is like none other,
someone to hold you tight
who gives you a feeling that everything is allright.
Someone i can walk to
Someone I can talk to
Someone I can trust
When everything of mine rust.
The one who laughs when i am a clown ,
but the same cry when i drown .
someone who picks you when you fall,
but the same pushes you hard when you crawl.
Someone who listens
At any time of the day.
Someone who brightens ,
Any thing that’s gray.
The one who always wants to be my friend ,
but the same fights for me until the bitter end.
Someone to hold you when you're weak
Someone to make you feel complete
Someone who wil save me,
When everything goes wrong.
Someone who will comfort me,
And help me to be strong.
The one who knows the real me ,
but the same drives to the better me.
Someone who will always be,
Just like I want to be..
Actually we dont live for the wordly fame ,
neither we require a great acclaim.
But we live to know that someone cares
Someone who wil always remain true-
Someone who is my best friend.
Someone just like u.......
" Happy Friendship Day "
..............................Nits................................
20 comments:
Nitin....amazing work!!!
i guess this one is ya best piece of writing.
m telling u thodi aur likh lo, den will publish them as a book.
Nice work Dude.... Happy Friendship Day!!! :)
A killer post in terms of content, simplicity of language, innocence & connect of expression!!! Its been worded the way its written on the walls of heart:D...zyada ho gaya...haina...:D anyways...Real gud work...
Keep it up!
Cheerio..
someone is speaking his heart out today.......
Hmm.. so very true! Awesome bro.. Very very well written! A masterpiece! Somehow, this is the best way to write.. Lucid and has amazing depth.. well done bro! :)
touching yaar......thoughts have come out beautifully......wonderfully written, i really liked it.....waiting to read more:)
beautiful, awesome...can go on and on... totally impressive... this poem shows how much u respect friendship.. keep up the good work buddy
i m glad to see that you have numerous followers on your blog.
that not only goes to show that you write very well but also that people love reading it
i liked yr latest poem 'someone' coz i m looking for that someone 2 :)
well a great poet praising about another great poet is something u will often see but a great poet bowing down to the work of d other great poet is not that often seen.this work of urs will always be at a level which even great poets cannot reach.atleast i cannot.cheers :-)
another killer post by killer dude. he not only writes gud but also present them beautifully. may god help him in finding him or her....heheh All the best really nice poem
Thanks guys for all the appreciation.....:):)
hmm... impressive!!1 tusi gr8 ho:)
it's simply awesome..... seems someone is writing from bottom of his hrt.....and a grt dedication to friends on friendship day....
abe tu shayar kab se ho gaya?
Its really awesome...one of the good masterpiece of poems..Its a mixture of emotions and your innocence...easy to understand...Simple n sweet...just like you...
Will love to read more n more of ur poems..
please keep writing...Keep it up..
Al the best.
I can't believe it!!! its sooo beautiful yet so simple!!!! wishing it for you that for the one you've written this understands your feeling sooooon!!! its lovely!!!! :):):)
Nits i dont have words to say after reading this, just want to say.. ur getting better with every blog and i am lucky to have you as a part of my life..
Good expression of thoughts in words man... great work.. keep it going... Keep Rocking
hmm-- excellent , splendid .. impressive n one autograph please :)
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