Right or Wrong….
We have spent our lives half way long,
Thinking about things Right or wrong.
Right is right and the wrong is wrong,
Why did I wasted so much time just thinking along.
I watched a spider build a web weaving it through stand by strand.
She didn’t thought who would land, she just weaved it with a hope so grand…
Her hope of trapping might pay off or not
But she didn’t wasted her life just thinking along.
Touch your heart and ask, has there been a time before,
Where you thought of the things as wrong,
But in the end, Regretted …
Only to find it was not the things but ‘you’ who went wrong.
Its still so much left to do which we can,
Not thinking too much over the foot we land..
If it turned right , it’s the luck for us
But turning wrong would not cost us that much….
After all what is there to loose…
The punch is not effective until it bruise….
Its just the other half left with us & the choice is ours..
To be the spider building a web,
Or To stand at the shore, thinking for the river to take us along…….
20 comments:
hey bhai..
nice poem...after a long tym..:)
good job, keep it up...:)
nice.....
waise truely speaking, its kind of visible u wrote aftr long..
the flow u write in is lil out of track at sum places..
isliye kehti hu, dont giv up..
likhte raha karo..
n ya, very meaningful n true poem..
It truly depicts our state of mind. very nicely framed in words.luv it....wanna read more of your work. Hope to get more thoughts soon!!!
Thanks Guys for your appreciation.... and charu special thanks to you for pushing me to take this again :):):):)
nice one...again poetry on hi-fi thoughts.....
Hey Dude!!! its gr8 2 read ur wrk aftr so long....gr8 once again...seems like ur r bothered wit somethng...;) is it??? gr8 wrk...keep it up....!!!
Wonderful
As usual needless to say....G8 work..don't ever stop writing!!
abey tu ye sab sochta kaise hai?? main to bas incidents hi likh pata hu...writing poems is certainly nt my cup of tea...as far as this one goes, i mst repeat myself....i m a 'HUGE' fan of urs
hello bro......
after a long time.....
very nice...
ery well expressed :).... The reality is portrayed in a beautiful way... keep up the good work buddy :)
amazing Nin!!! really!!
nice one bro.. Been a long time.. Waiting for d best.. sure yet to come!!! :)
Thanks for writing this :)
Its interesting to read ! Keep it up !!
I really like the thought behind this poem.... how do u manage to pick up small things and write about them... u have an amazing talent.... likte rahooo !! :)
wow :) a really good poem! so relevant and true. i wish tat i don loose further more any time :) :)xoxoxo
Thanks a lot Guys for all the appreciation..... Thanks a ton....
very nicely written.. a thought provoking poem...
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